高考英语作文专项训练

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2009、2010年高考写作任务的共同特点： 描述所给信息： 2009：志愿者去敬老院开展志愿活动（时间、地点、人物、活动） 2010：李越的事迹（时间、地点、人物、活动） 分析原因、影响或结果 2009：老人们的反应 2010：李越的事迹对同学的影响 阐发你的简短评论或看法 2009：简短评论 2010：你的评论 关注学生生活、关注情感体验、关注表达的开放性 书面表达最忌: 要点不全，内容不完整； 字(字迹潦草 ,字迹不清)； 不分段(分段是为了文章更清晰,至少 要分成两段)； 低级错误(主谓不一致,时态不一致,词 性变化不正确,单词拼写错误等)； 词汇堆砌(整篇几乎无完整句子,一塌 糊涂,某个词汇过频重复使用)。 一、作文的卷面与书写； 二、语言表达的层次性与丰富性； 三、行文的逻辑性与流畅性； 四、文章的思想性与开放性； 整洁、规范的书写是写作得分的亮点[规范策略] A. 词汇的选择灵活多样；[词汇策略] B. 句型结构运用灵活多变;[句式策略] A.突出文章段落中的主题句； B.归纳各种功能的连词；[行文策略] 书面表达解题策略 如要表示“使”，不要仅依靠make: • a) This society still makes women unable to enjoy equal rights. • b) Women are still denied equal rights. • a) The incident made me recall one of my past experiences. • b) The incident reminded me of one of my past experiences. 如要表达“越来越”，不要只使用more and more: • a) More and more students find learning English has become more and more difficult. • b) Students in growing numbers find learning English has become increasingly difficult. • a) More and more teenagers smoke cigarettes in recent years. • b) Teenage smoking is on the rise in recent years. • a) More and more teachers are demanded with the development of economy. • b) There is an increasing demand for teachers with the development of economy. 如要表达“大多数”，不要一味用most: • a) Most students take a part-time job after class. • b) The vast majority of students take a part-time job after class. • a) Most people take part in sports of different kinds. • b) The considerable proportion of people take part in sports of different kinds. • a) Most college students take a negative attitude towards smoking. • b) The large percentage of college population take a negative attitude towards smoking. 如要表达“不仅……，而且……”不要只用 not only... but also: • a) Taking a part-time job can not only earn a little money, but also have an opportunity to contact society. • b) Taking a part-time job means more than a little money you can earn. It also means an opportunity to contact society. 词汇策略 1、因为生病了他昨天没有参加会议。 He didn’t come to the meeting yesterday because he was ill. He didn’t attend the meeting yesterday on account of his illness. He was absent from the meeting yesterday owing to his illness. His illness accounted for his absence from the meeting yesterday. His illness prevented him from attending the meeting yesterday. 2、当他是孩童时，就喜爱学习。 When he was a child, he liked to learn everything. As a child, he was fond of learning. As a child, he took great pleasure in learning. When he was a child, he was crazy about learning. When he was a chil... 查看更多